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Juniper 🫐's avatar

lovely start - i know more about her and want to read on!

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Posy Churchgate's avatar

Great start Laura - giving the reader enough backstory to pique interest without overloading them.

Im already getting the idea that taking the blame for things is her Achilles Heel.

Just watch your tenses - obviously you need past tense for memories but for Debra’s current story, stay consistent 😍

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